Jan 25, 2007

my next vacation


Italy is very nice country. One of the most beautiful contries in the world.It has very nice, important cities. I and my friend are planning to have a vacation next summer to Italy.We have many exciting plans for our trip to Italy. We going to stay for one week there. we 're going to go to Vence city. This city is an imazing city because the location of this city is in the sea. The water is around all the city. It's like somthing u cant believe. Even the roads there are made by water. The people use a small boats to move . So i think it's gonna be fun for us to move in the city. Second we will go to another city called Milan . It's a big city . We going to visit intermilan soccer team. One of the famoust soccer teams in Italy and Europe. We might can able to watch them playing. Then we 're going to go to Sicilia island. it's south Italy in the middeterian sea .we 're going to spend two days in pzzelle city. So we 're going to swim in the beautiful beach and enjoy the hot weather. Finally and the last thing we 're goint to go to is Rome the greatest city in the world, and one of the oldest cities too. We going to see the old buildings, the old houses and know how they used to build it . After that we will visist saint peter's church in the Vatican. we going to see the beautiful paintings inside the church. these paintings belongs to very famous painters like Lionardo Dafinshi and others. So this is will be the last step before we leave Italy. That's how we going to spend our vacation in Italy.

1 comment:

ESL Teacher said...

Wow! That will be an amazing trip! Venice and Rome are marvelous. I have never been to Sicily, but I would like to go there.

You give great descriptions of your plans.
How are your first and last sentence similiar?
An example topic sentence might be: My friend and I have many exciting plans for our trip to Italy, one of the most beautiful countries in the world.

Also, "gonna" is used in speaking, but it is too casual for a writing assignment. You can use "going to" instead.