Jan 25, 2007

`Memorable Vacations


Most of the people enjoy their vacations by going out for a picnic or visit some places or sit in front of television sets and few people visit their friend and relatives as i did in my last vacations

I visited INDIA where my paternal uncle lives. I enjoyed a lot.I stayed there for 1 month, during those days i visited GOLDEN TEMPLE and JALIAN WALLA BAGH. Golden temple is a holy place where people worship and by going there one can regain internal peace. one of the most important thing of golden temple is that it is fully gold plated.The hari mandir,now called the golden temple is a living symbol of the spirtiual and histrocial traditions of the sikhs.The temple have been a source of inspirstion to the sikh community ever since its foundation.The golden temple is not a place of workship but also a rallying centre of sikh solidarity.It is the heritage of sikh people gathered in their five hundred-year old history.After that we are going to Jalian walla bagh. Jalian walla bagh is a historical garden where cruelty of Britishers is buried. one can go and witness the cruelty of Britishers.
Thats the place i like to u again,i really missing that place. I am really missing India and defiantly visit India again in my next vacation

1 comment:

ESL Teacher said...

The Golden Temple sounds like a peaceful place.
I like the transition words you use.
How do your first and last sentence connect? Are there similiar words and ideas in both?

You ideas can be more clear if you make sure each sentence has a subject and a verb. For example, "so went Delhi and took a flight back."
Also, every word at the beginning of a sentence needs to be capitalized (We enjoyed the marriage a lot.)

If you have more questions, please talk to me.