Many of you, when watching TV enjoy to see warm weather, ocean, palm trees, girls in swimming suites and sunny beaches.I would certainly love to go to one of them. First name that comes to mind is Myrtle Beach, which is located in North Carolina - little more than eleven hours drive from Cleveland. I would like to take a friend or a family member with me so I could have some company. We would walk the beach everyday from one end to another enjoying watching people suntanning, playing beach volleyball, reading books, walking their dogs and just simply relaxing. I think that sunsets are very romantic, so I would for sure want to catch few of them. As for my friend and I, we would do lots of tanning, swimming, looking for some sea shells, perhaps do some fishing from a shore and like everyone there - do lots of relaxing too. Surrounding areas are also very inviting. Lots of put-put mini-golf places, stores, outlet malls and little souvanier shops. You can get anything you want or especially when you forgot to pack something like simple sunscreen lotion. I also enjoy trying different dishes so eating in local dinners sounds like a very good idea.
In conclusion, going and visiting warm sunny beaches like Myrtle Beach is a great idea and place to go for my future dream vacations.
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What’s up Greg! It’s very good and interesting that u know what are u going to do on your vacation. Now, when I wrote the story, I want to be there too, but firs of all we need to finish our homework with R&W 8-) U need to start with grammar and spelling. For example, “when watching TV enjoy to see warm weather” incorrect! “When we (or I) watch TV, we (I) enjoy to see warm weather” correct, or “Lots of put-put mini-golf places, stores, outlet malls and little souvanier shops.” Where is verb? And some words need corrections (suntanning - sun tanning; souvanier- souvenir). And one more thing, I see very well concluding, but I don’t see clearly your topic! I think, you’ll take my suggestions and improve this.
I love Myrtle Beach. I used to go there every summer when I was a little girl. It is very relaxing and there are wonderful restaurants.
You have great supporting sentences with good examples of your plans. I like your introduction. It gets the reader's attention, but make sure you include a topic sentence that is similiar to your concluding sentence.
THAT'S VERY NICE GREG ... VERY VERY NICE HA HA
Myrtle Beach seems beautiful. You give very good descriptions. I might just go there next year. Keep up the good work.
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