Apr 10, 2007
Turning point
When I was in 12Th grade in India, I was invited to retreat called Joy camp. It was conducted by Union of Evangelical Students of India. I was learned basic christian doctrines about God, Sin and Salvation. I was really enjoyed in that retreat and I came to understand about God and salvation to all mankind sinner like me. I Came to a strong convection about my sinful life and I asked my lord to forgiveness. In that retreat I accepted Jesus Christ as my personal saviour. Before that retreat, I was attended to churchregularly, as unbeliver. When I came to my college after meeting is over, I was felt very happy and I feel like a burden free man. My heart was filled with Joy and happiness. I seen a great change in every aspect in my life. That retreat was biggest turning point in my life.
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Wonderful topic for paragrph.
I know that you are talking about whereas I also like you outlived salvatoin through Jesus Christ. In fact, it's one of the biggest turning points that can happen in human's life.
Let me give you some advice for improve your topic:
- try to compare your turning point with stories which we read;
- could you explain what does mean UN believer;
- check capitalise some words (there are some words where it isn't use);
- make more space between words and sentences.
Good luck!
Hi Sivarao I understand your turning point if it comes to your personal experiance with Good's Word. But you forgot compare your story to one of once from the class. Please also check your speling. "I was really enojed" you can easly skipped verb was.Good luck!
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