Apr 5, 2007

cultural tradition

similarities:

  1. party
  2. decorations every where
  3. count down before 12:00 pm
  4. calling friends at midnight

differences:

  1. family gathering
  2. having dinner either with family or with friends
  3. most people go for live bands in restaurants not to night clubs

2 comments:

Volha said...

It's interesting what are you wrote about.But you forgot about the topic sentence of the paragraph and you didn't describe things being compared(blue book, page 124).Good luck!

ESL Teacher said...

Anas,

I couldn't find your paragraph on the blog to give you comments. Did you publish it?

Emily