Apr 24, 2007

Alcoholisim

Alcoholism can be defined as .." the consistent consumption and preoccupation with alcohol to the extent that it interferes with the individual's life."(Encyclopedia) Alcoholism is a problem affecting all aspects of society. According to the CDC,(Center for Disease Control)10-23 % of all alcohol consumers are considered alcoholics. Although it is difficult to pinpoint the exact cause of alcoholism. there are many ways to get pass it.
Causes
1- Genetic & Biological predisposition
2- Social Factors
a- Peers-examples
b- Family-peer pressure
c- Society- culture
3-Stress- Inadequate coping mechanisms,use of alcohol
4- Gender-Males twice as likely to be alcoholics than females
Solutions
1-Alcoholics anonymous
2-Rehab
3- physiologic treatment
a- Stress-coping mechanism
b-Emotional issues
c-Depression
4-New social setting
5-Support groups
6- Religion
Alcoholism can be caused by many different factors.People must find a way to get pass alcoholism.There are many sources of help those who need it.

4 comments:

BlackRose said...

nesrin...... depression is not one of the solutions..... and genetical predisposition is not one of the causese.. ok good luck

Yura said...

Hi Nesrin, you wrote a lot of courses and solution and it is very good, but try to chose 3 the mane of itch. Moreover, I didn't see your thesis sentence at the end of the first paragraph. You should introduce there your 3 causes and 3 solutions.

JOEP said...

Hi your your paragraphs about Alcoholism are very good. But you have write more about conclusion part with specific solutions to take infutre.

JOEP said...

Hi your paragraph is good, but you need to writ atleast 2 senteces of causes and solutions. Also you need to hightlight vocubalary words should be hilighted. And also need to use in adverb clause in your pargraph.
Sivarao.