Sport is a proses start with the person from the child time until the meant he get old and can not do any thing. Sport is that thing give a person good shape and keep him healthy.And one of the sport field is Soccer.
Soccer is apartonete and skill that growth with every game the person play.It is like school the person start at first grad Than it will move forward step by step until he gradgoed but he still miss so much. Because always something know . that what soccer about .
#The person he most love the game first.
#than the person will need some one to show hem from where he should start.
#than the person should work on his skill, get improve and better.
#than he play the game almost every day to keep his skill level up.
# The most impotent part is to blive in hem self and he can do what ever.
#He should work hard and hard to get to the top of his game.
#than it is a team work not one person by it self.
I know that a person love to succeed and rich the top of every thing we do in live. soccer is a sport that make a person run hard to get a cool and help his friends to win the game. The soccer team work hard and parakeets almost every day so the know where they need to improve and get better.So they win the game .
every one want to move up with his skill to a different levelly and get better and better.
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Topic sentence/Concluding Sentence:
This should be an academic topic. You can still use soccer, but you don't need to include your personal experiences about it.
Definition example:
Soccer is a sport that...
Three supporting ideas:
Use three specific examples about the topic.
For example:
History of Soccer
Popularity
Rules
Good Exercise
How someone can improve in soccer
Transitions/Vocabulary:
apartonete is not an English word
Grammar/Adjective Clauses:
You need two adjective clauses for your paragraph
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