Gardening is an activity where people use a small area of land to grow plants. The main goal of this activity is to create a beautiful environment. There are many types of gardening that have a specific goal and require different steps, special tools and knowledge. Flower gardening makes our homes more attractive. Vegetable and fruit gardening allows us to eat our own fresh and tasty vegetables and fruits. Urban gardening is a way to bring a little piece of country to the city. This also provides relaxation from the stresses of everyday life. Growing plants is a hobby for many people all over the world, who enjoy spending time outside and being a part of nature.
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