When a person have dream, he will work hard to succeed and reach his dream. Then when I was ten years old I start dream about medical school . Than after that I start to ask about how to be in medical school,(pharmacy school). you most know allot about gamester and sines to enrol in medical schools, than after that I start to ask questions about how to be in pharmacies. and all my questions lead me to the fallowing steps:
First, I need to speak English,and to be ab ll to read and write with no problem.
The second step is to have a high school diploma to be ab ll to enrol in college.But not any college Toledo college, because the have the best system for pharmacy.The next step is to complete two years to finch the regular class, I most Arne sixty eighth credit. Than after that I start with my meager as a pharmacy and it will take my four years at less to finch . And be ab ll to work with my dagre in any pleas I want to , and Pharmacy graduates are eligible to apply for registration as graduate students for the degree of PhD..
I am working so hard to finch it, and I hope I will have the power to finish it to the end, and everyone wishes me luck.
Feb 27, 2007
Pharmacist is my dream
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(Wan a person had dream)this part is confusing for me.
I can't understand your idea.U need to look at itagain :spelling, punsuate,make it clearer
I think, the title " Pharmacy is my dream" will be better.
Title and first sentence is confusing for me. My proposition is /My Pharmacy Dream/
hi dany you have to correct the spell (about), you write ab0ut you have to correct that one. And the topic sentence according to my thinking i want become a pharmacist.
hi dany. I like your pararaph. it's good, you explaining exactly how u going to be a pharmacist. In your paragraph there are some spelling mistakes u made, and i think u missing some commas in the paragraph. In the first paragraph u wrote ( when a person have dream )i think it suppose to be ( when a person has dream )..
hey dany whats up man .............i like your paragraph good job and wish you the best ....... keep the good going ...........
When a person has a dream..
Good transitions.
I have brought to my life the medical school goal. This sentence is confusing. How does it relate to your first sentence or your next sentence? Try to connect them together.
Why Ireland? Can't you go to school in the U.S.?
Pass the society's license Examination. This is an incomplete sentence.
This is the information directly from the Trinty College Website.
You can either quote some of this information in your paragraph by using " " quotation marks or you can write the information in your own words. If you don't do these, it is considered cheating. If you have questions, please email me.
Enrol at Trinity College Dublin for the four-year course leading to the Degree of Bachelor of Science (Pharmacy)
Obtain preliminary registration with The Pharmaceutical Society of Ireland (forms available from the Registrar)
Complete twelve months practical training in an approved establishment under the supervision of a tutor-pharmacist
Pass the Society's Licence Examination.
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