How can I become a good pharmacy Technican? I found some information to do my goal. Becoming a pharmacist in USA is not easy. I must do step by step to get Pharmacy certificate such as:
The first step is taking these classes : math, chemistry, biology and health program. Next, I must complete college to get certificate program for Pharmacy Technician. While I am studying in college, I have to practice with my knowlege about pharmacy to make sure have experience before I graduate. After that, I need take examination of National Pharmacy Technician certificate. Finally, I can get certificate for Pharmacy Technician. I have good job with my certificate which I got at college about body and health. Every two years I must re-certify my certificate by studying 10 hours each year to complete.
I will do step by step as well as I can. Exactly, it isn't easy as I know that but I hope I will do it well on my best. I will make my big goal become true.
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Hi katy
You have spelling mistake like
"heath".I think is health.
"I want to become a pharmacy in USA."- pharmacist
It is a great goal!
Hi,
you have an ambitious goal and I wish you a good luck on the way of getting it done.
Now I will give you some advises:
- "to become a pharmacy"- I think you have to write "pharmacyst" or "pharmacy technician" not "pharmacy" because Pharmacy is a place where people go to buy medicines, it is not a title of a job.
-"The first"- if you mean the first step it would be OK otherwise it has to be just "first";
-after "Next" you have to use a comma;
-"...work on it to have experienced..."- you have to work in a pharmacy to have experience (noun not past verb);
-"I need take...."- because you have 2 verbs, the second verb has to be at the infinitive, so "I need to take..." would be better;
-"every two year.." - every two years and not comma after it;
-look at the concluding sentence too.
Sincerely,
Florea
Thank you for your help. It was a good lesson for me that I'll remember from now on.
Good conclusion and transitions.
Check the rules for a good title again.
While I am studying in college, I also have to work on it to have experience before I graduated.
What does "it" mean? Explain what you have to work on.
"before I graduate."
"Every two years.."
I hope I will do it well on my best. This is a little confusing.
"Exactly" isn't
You made some great changes! Here are a few other suggestions.
Title - To become or Becoming a pharmacist
The first step is taking these classes:
Spaces in between commas (i.e. math, chemistry, )
"I also have to work with my knowlege about pharmacy"
"I work with my knowledge"
These sentences are confusing. How can you make them more clear?
Topic/Concluding Sentence: .20 Last sentence is unclear ("do it well on my best")
Supporting Sentences: .20 Some confusing sentences
Transitions/Vocabuary: .25 Good Exactly is confusing
Grammar/Punctuation: .25
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