Shkodra is a very ancient city in Albania. At the entrance, there is a beautiful castle that has a sad story. In that story half of a woman's body was buried in the castle in order so the castle would stand and not fall. In the picture, there is overlooking Shkodra from the castle. In summer the climate is very hot and me and my family go to the beach or the lake. In winter its often cold but it doesn't snow a lot. I had a lot of fun when I was at my birthplace and I got to ride my bike a lot. I remember when I was a teacher and my students loved me so much! I have a beautiful house in Shkodra I miss Shkodra a lot! When I go back to my country, the ancient castle will welcome me.
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I see that your home town is very special for you, so it is for me. We never forget our countries. It makes us special. The story is nice and very descriptive.
-So, I understand that you want to spend the next vacation in your country again ? Wasn't it the topic for this paragraph?
It is nothing critic, I just want to clarify a thing in my head.
By the way, what subject did you teach?
I will not give you my name because I am not part of your class; but, reading all the paragraphs I couldn't understand what was the topic, almost all students wrote about a vacation...
-Is it a new topic that you just started to post?- about your birth place.
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