My trip to the California was the most memorable vacation I have ever taken.
I, my husband and ours friends decided to go there in September 2006.
We flew from Cleveland to San Francisco.When we arrived in San Francisco, we got a rental car,
because we planned to drive towards Las Vegas in Nevada. In San Francisco we were two days and visited many
interesting places, such as:Chinatown,Alcatraz,Golden Bridge.
I liked there cable car and unique architecture.
After two days we started to drive towards Nevada.
During ours trip the weather was great. Everyday we visited many places,such as:Lake Taho, Yosemite Park,
Mammoth Lake,Death Valley.Each place was different from the other and we had great time and unusual
impressions.Extreme feelings made me Death Valley.It is the largest natural museum located below sea level.
My first impression was it appears to be a barren wasteland without any life.That was not true there were much
to be see and experienced,for example Bad Water,Scotty's Castle.Two story Spanish Villa in a desert location
was built by a chicago insurance magnate.He constructed Death Valley ranch for his health,because dry,sunny
climate improved his fettle.We had no time to see everything because outside was very hot.
We tolerated that very badly.Death Valley is one of the hottest places on earth.We drove over 100 miles and
we were afraid if we have enough water to drink.
We will never forget the excellent trip and we are going to take similar trip in the future.
2 comments:
San Francisco is an amazing city. It sounds like you were able to see everything!
I like all of the examples of things you saw. Maybe you could choose one of them and give a little more detail about it so I can imagine or see what you are writing about. How were the places different? What were your unusual impressions?
You added some great details about your feelings on your trip. You also made some good grammar changes. Good job.
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