It was a week before the thanks giving when my family decided to go to Orlando city , Florida to visit the Disney world . How many of you know Mr.Mickey mouse and the other folks , probably most of you , but how many of you had the dream of meeting them , maybe a few or non , Its true that I'm 27 years old man ,but i still have a little child inside me , and i still need to feed this childish instinct from time to time. so i think nothing will be better than a visit to the Disney world , any way we took the air plane from Cleveland to Orlando city , and after the arrival and car rental our trip just started , at that evening we went to see the Cirque Du Soleil and i cant describe how wonderful was the show like no other .
The next day we went to the magic kingdom and toony land where the a story book fantasy comes to life , the castle , Cinderella, Aladdin, beauty & the beast all the cartoon characters i saw them i had great picture with them Mickey , Goofy, Blotto and even Mini ( she gave me her phone number but please don't tell Mickey ) and if you want to get the whole magic picture you should wait and watch the fire works and what we did , the sky was bright for half an hour it was amazing i have never seen such a beautiful thing like this before , any way the third day we went to the EPCOT and we talked with the turtle (character from the cartoon movie finding nemo ) , then we enjoy playing with all the games there like the test track and mission space .........etc
I think if i am going to talk about all the details in this trip i am not going to finish today , but anyway i just want say how happy i was and how full of energy i was , i guess the 10 or maybe the 12 years old child inside me were jumping all the time ,and not the 27 years old man , but you should go there and try that great experience by your self , its the only place where you can goof around , and believe me i would love to go there again and again, and stay in that magic world where you can live your childish dreams and forget your problems...........
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I enjoyed your detailed descriptions and excitement about your fun trip. You use good adjectives and examples.
You have a great concluding sentence. How can you conect it more to your topic sentence?
Also, You only have 1 short sentence in the first paragraph and one really long sentence. How can you make the long sentence into shorter sentences? The same for the 2nd paragraph.
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