Basketball is a game that is now played and enjoyed by people of all ages and sexes. According to the history of basketball, This game was invented by the Canadian man James Naismith in 1891, who decided to create a game which teams could play that would be fun and get people fit. In this game there are two teams. Each team has five players and each team tries to get more points, by thrown a ball through the basket. This game took off immediately and was a hit in schools and colleges in American in 1892. Basketball has been growing in America since that time . In fact this game is one of the favorite sports for the American now .
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yiur paragraph is great about Basket ball.Just make sure spelling " sexes " inted of success. or any meanig of sexes.
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