Apr 30, 2007

Alcoholism is the World Problem

Alcoholism has become a major problem throughout many parts of the world. Ironically, the more "developed" and advanced a nation becomes the more it seems vulnerable to the social and personal problems that are directly or indirectly caused by alcoholism.
People begin to drink for different causes.In fact, an individual's decision to use alcohol is the result of a combination of biological and social factors. Some people drink to relax after hard days work. Some drink just to get them drunk to try and forgot their problems. Some do it because their friends do when they all get together, and they want to be accepted by their peers. Alcohol makes people act differently. Some when drinking turn into the greatest joke tellers. Some, when totally intoxicated, become very violent.And since alcohol makes the brain and memory go fuzzy, some people actually forget what’s troubling them, at least for a night. But when the person wakes up, all the troubles are still there. Alcohol never, ever fixes what is wrong with somebody’s life. In fact, it almost always makes things worse, because alcoholism is just one more problem to add to whatever else is going on.
One important thing to remember about alcohol is that it is a drug, and people get addicted to it. The truth is , alcoholism is a disease , and it can be very hard for alcoholics to stop drinking.
One of possible solutions to the problem of alcoholism is visiting the doctor.He will start a treatment . There are a lot of different organizations to help alcoholics to fight their habits. Also a big support comes from family. Relatives can help every moment.
People have to control what they are doing. If every person pay attention what and how many he is drinking, alcoholism like the world problem will disappear.




2 comments:

rudina said...

I think your writing is very clear. You have causes and solutions together,
but you should organize your essay in pharagraphs. You have used transition words.

ESL Teacher said...

Topic/Concluding/Thesis .20


3 causes/3 solutions .20

3 transitions/3 new vocabulary .20

Grammar/ 3 adverb clauses .20