Apr 24, 2007

Alcoholism

Alcoholism is the addiction on alcohol. It is one of the most growing problems in the United States of America.
Causes:
- broken families
- emotional disturbance
- personal problems and reality run away

Solutions:
- strict law about alcohol
- finding solutions to the root of the problem
- education about alcohol and its effect
Finaly the society and the government should work together as one hand to stand against this problem and to help people recover and live in peace.

3 comments:

NESRIN said...

Hi Blackrose
Your paragraph doesn't have a conclusion.

Luz said...

Hi Blackrose

Check your spelling...
I do not see your thesis statement.

Noel said...

You might check the spelling.
your title spelling is wrong.