A teacher is someone who is able to teach a variety of subjects, and are well prepared to accomplish their duty. There are preschool teachers, primary grades teachers, and teachers who teach different subjects.
First, the preschool teachers teach children from 3 to 5 years old. They begin to introduce to the children the program of studying that has to be as they are playing. So, the process of learning is combined with their play.
Then, teachers who teach in elementary schools have their students between age 5 to 10. Theirs aim is to teach these grades is the most important one. They are the ones that teach them the first knowledge about reading, writing, math, science and social studies. Moreover, they are as parents for their students.
Finally, another type of teachers are the ones who have their major in teaching different subjects. Their students are from 11 to 18 years old, or older than that for those who are in colleges or universities. They are asked to learn consciously for every subject. No professor considers that the subject he/she teaches is less important than the others.
Teachers, to whom everybody has to thank, are well prepared on their minor or major, to accomplish their duty.
5 comments:
I agree with you that not everybody
could be a teacher
You have good details and examples in your paragraph, but there is something that I don't understand it's a sentence "Tho make it happen" Do you want to say Though or To. Try to fix it and it will be better paragraph.
Florea you have a good paragraph, seems you are familiar in this subject. You have a definition sentence and adjective clauses too.
...age I think ages
...tipe type
Topic sentence/Concluding Sentence:
what do you mean by respond in a somewhat way? Good concluding sentence.
Three supporting ideas:
Excellent. Well organized!
Transitions/Vocabulary:
Use some tranisitions to connect three main ideas.
Use another word for teacher.
In the U.S. we use elementary schools instead of primary schools.
I don't know this word (constiously)
considers
Grammar/Adjective Clauses:
Great clauses!
introduce the children to the program of studying that has to be as they are playing (add to) ( no comma)(this part is unclear. What do you mean?)
no comma after another type of teachers
Their students (are) from 11 to 18..
importand (important)
Topic/Concluding Sentence: .25 Great!
3 supporting ideas: .20 Good changes and examples to support. Some sentences still unclear because of grammar.
Transitions/Vocabulary: .25
Great improvement. They make your ideas much clearer.
Grammar/Adjective Clauses: .20
and is well prepared.
Their
Nice clauses
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