Mar 27, 2007

Being a teacher

In most cultures teaching is referred to a profession, realized by well prepared teachers who know the importance of their job.The main role of the teacher is to teach the students the main lessons experienced by the people and in the other side students will understand how the world works and keep on going to practice what they have learned. This is realized from teaching methods.There are different teaching methods which have changed and help students to concentrate in their procces of learning. Also,we must not forget the passing of knowledge from one generation to another allows students to grow into useful members of human society,the teaching improve the future. In primary schools each class has a teacher who stays with the pupils for most of the time and help them. We will have a better future from teaching masters.

4 comments:

eva said...

Being a teacher is a great profession. The kids' future usually depends form their teacher.
I like your paragraph, Rudina.
You have a definition sentence and I found the adjective clauses too.

ESL Teacher said...

Topic/Concluding sentence: as a profession
What do you mean by physiologic features? How does this connect to your ideas?

How do your first and last sentence connect?

3 Supporting ideas:
Main role of teacher
Teaching Methods
Teaching improves future
Try to connect these ideas more logically.

Different teaching methods are being used for different students which are called " lifelong learning." This is confusing. What is the teaching method? What do you mean by lifelong learning?
Transitions/Vocabulary:
Great vocabulary
Try using this or these to connect your ideas.


Grammar/Adjective Clauses:
good clauses

JOEP said...

Hi,
Your paragraph is great. But you to check senctence onstruction and grammar.
sivarao

ESL Teacher said...

Topic/Concluding Sentence: .25

3 supporting ideas: .25
You have made some great changes to clarify your ideas!
Transitions/Vocabulary: .20
Good use of "this"
on the other side
realized is unusual here
try accomplished or done

Grammar/Adjective Clauses: .25
teaching improves the future
and helps them
good clauses