"Accounting is responsible for these internal functions :
-General Accounting
-Budgeting
-Auditing
-Administrative procurement
-Agency Office Supplies
Audition is an accounting process used in business. It uses an independent body to examine a business transactions and statements. The ultimate purpose of financial auditing to present an accurate account of a company's financial business transactions. The practice is used to make sure that the company is trading financially fairly, and also that the accounts they are presenting to the public or shareholders are accurate and justified"( i.e. According to www. glavbuh-audit.com/ru)
7 comments:
Your paragraph is informative. We are not supposed to put any personal informaltion or feelings in a definition paragraph. For example, your sentences "My profession is accountant" and "The most interesting for me is financial auditing."
Hi Volha!
You chose good topic, but you did not entirely that what Emily ask.
You had to use an adjective clause in your paragraph, also about topic and concluding sentences,- I recomend use p. 107 of Blueprints.
Good luck!
Hi, Your topic great. But you have to fallow rules of paragraph. which are Topic sentence,supporting ideas and concluding sentence.
sivarao
Please come talk to me about your grade. Emily
Topic/Concluding Sentence: .10 Good definition. I think you mean auditing instead of audition. You should have a concluding sentence that is similiar to your first sentence.
3 Supporting ideas:.10
Purpose of auditing is your 1 supporting idea. Try to include 2 others to support your main idea.
You can use According to..at the beginning of your paragraph.
Transitions/Vocabulary: .15 You use many difficult words.
See the transitions we practiced for this chapter and try to include them in your writing.
Grammar/Adjective Clauses: .10 Very clear grammar. You needed two adjective clauses in your paragraph.
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