Feb 27, 2007
To Become a Bilingual Teacher
There are many things I want to achieve throughout my life. One of my priorities is to become a bilingual teacher with a focus on Spanish and English. This is going to be a difficult goal for me to complete, because I have not finished my high school education. I have already talked with my school counselor to discuss the steps involved in becoming a teacher. First, I have to improve my overall English skills. I can improve them by taking all ESL classes. Secondly, I should take the classes which will prepare me to take the GED exam. The GED exam is an exam offered as an equivalent diploma to all Americans who have not accomplished a high school education. Next, I have to take the SAT exam, which is a placement exam that is required for college admission. After, I have overcome all these obstacles I can go to any college or university of my choice. Once I select my college, I will be able to complete various courses to graduate from college. Finally, when I have acquired all these steps, I will be ready to be a bilingual teacher here in the United States. Becoming a teacher will fulfill one of the many goals I have in my life.
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Hi Noel, here are some suggestions for you:
First of all you should check spelling by yourself (I see 5 mist spelling words) and then by computer on blogger or on Microsoft Office Word. It helps you to see mist spelling words and couple other things. If you have some questions you can ask me, and I will explain you. Second, you should change your topic (To become a Bilingual Teacher). Next, in lest sentence I think (one of the many goals "that" I have in my life.)
You did a great job! Your paragraph is clear and easy to understand, because you use a lot transactions words, and use their correctly and logically.
achieve throughtout my life. I think, achieve throught my life I have already talked with my school counselor to discuss the steps involved in becoming a teacher.
I had already discuss with the school counselor about step involved in, to become a teacher. First, I have to improve my overall English skills. I can improve them by taking all ESL levels. Secondly, I should take the clasess which will prepare me to take the GED exam. The GED exam is an exam offered as an equivalent diploma to all Ohioans who have not accomplished a high school education. Next, Ihave to take the SAT exam, which is a placement exam that is required for college admission. After, I have accomplished all these obstacles I can go to any college or university of my choice. Once I selet my college, I will be able to complete various courses to graduate from college. Finally, when I have acquired all these steps, I will be ready to be a bilingual teacher here in the United States. Becoming a teacher will fulfill one of the many goals I have in my life.
Hi noel. your paragraph is goood, i couldn't find any mistakes in your paragraph...
Good Title.
Great topic and concluding sentences!
Nice transitions.
Your ideas are very clear.
taking classes for all of the ESL levels.
The GED is actually an exam that people take all over the U.S., not just Ohio.
We usually used the verb overcome obstacles instead of accomplish.
Also, instead of aquired steps, you could use accomplished these steps.
Topic/Concluding Sentence: .25Excellent
Supporting Sentences: .25 Very clear
Transitions/Vocabuary: .25 Great acquire is used for physical objects or knowledge. You could use finish instead.
Grammar/Punctuation: .25 Well done!
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