It is one way to get my life better, to become a physics teacher. I used to be teacher in my country, I think it is my vocation and I can’t see myself doing something else better. To succeed in it is a long and difficult way.
First, I have to improve very well my English skill. It is the hardest part, I am not a man of letters but, I am taking ESL classes and I work hard on it.
Second, I have to take College Composition I and push myself harder to speak more English than I use to.
While I study English, I can work on my Teacher Diploma. It involves some other steps to get it done. First, I have to have all my documents translated in English language and notarized by a Public Notary Certificate in the
The next step, if I get the License, is to apply for a Teaching position at as many Boards of Education as I can.
Finally, if somebody will be interested in me I have to go to the interviews and chose the best offer.
When I get back my teaching job, I will see myself more comfortable in the
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thank for your advises.I have some advises for you
. First, I have to improve very well my English skill. It is the hardest part, I am not a man of letters but, I am taking ESL classes and I work hard on it( run-on)
While I study English I can work on my Teacher Diploma( while I am sudying...)
After it I have to send all ....( after it need comma )
If I will pass the exam...if I’ll get the License....When I will get back my teaching job ..(can not use will in conditional or time clause )
I think, your title represents the main idea,but titles are not written in all capital letters.
hi flora u need to work on your topic sentence you write all in capital letters you should have to change your cases.
HOW TO BECOME A PHYSICS TEACHER?
to become what I will like to, a Physics Teacher. I used to be teacher in my country, I think it to be where I want to be as a Physics Teacher.which I was back in my country.
Hi Florea.
If you go to the Blueprints book. On page 89 you'll see the rules for creating Titles.Why a'm telling you this's because your Tilte is all capitalized. Check rule number 6 what it say.This is a simple coment I hope is going to help you. I whish you good luck with your goal.
Wow! There are many steps you have to follow! How long do you think all of this will take?
This grammar in the first sentence is unclear. I understand your concluding sentence much better than your topic sentence.
physics teacher doesn't need to be capitalized
Good transitions
Some suggestions:
"push myself harder"
After that I have to send...
After this I will
"If I pass the exam, at its results I have to gather all my originals Diplomas.." This sentence is confusing.
Topic/Concluding .20 The grammar in first sentence is still confusing. Here is a suggestion:
One way to improve my life is to become a physics teacher
Supporting Sentences .15 Some sentences about documentation are unclear and difficult to read. Try to simplify this information.
Transitions/Vocabulary .25 Excellent! Your transition make your ideas more clear.
Grammar/Punctuation .20
than I used to..
commission, license, and diploma are lower-case unless you are refering to the specific title.
chose is past tense
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