I think accounting is a good job for me because, many years ago, I did this job in Poland, and I like it very much. I want to become an accountant here, and find a good job. My first step on the way is learning English. I am taking only one class a semester, because I don't have enough time. I need about a year to complete all English classes. During that time, I will want to meet with a Counsellor of Cuyahoga Community College to ask which classes I need to take. Second I will probably need computer classes, math, accounting and business skills. I would want a short program for the accounting, and then get a good job. Next, while working I am planning on taking more classes. Finally, reaching my career goal would be a great accomplishment. It is not going to be easy to become an accountant, even though I had some practice in Poland. I will be striving towards my goal.
6 comments:
Seems like a good goal. I wish you good luck. Since you have experience in accounting, it will be easy for you to find a job. I suggest you check your punctuation.
I like it very much. I like it so much.
I will want to meet with a Counsellor of Cuyahoga Community College to talk about the way of accounting.
I want to meet with a Counsellor of Cuyahoga Community College to talk about the way of accounting
Good introduction and transitions.
"I think accounting is a good job for me because many years ago I did this job in Poland, and I liked it very much."
All of your commas (,) need to be right after the word.
here,
semester,
Finally,
to end all English
instead of end, consider finish or complete
counselor
"the way of accounting" is confusing. Can you explain more clearly what you mean?
Finally , life will show me what will happen. What does this mean? Is it a necessary step in your process?
It is not going to be easy to become an accountant, even though I had some practice in Poland,
Topic/Concluding Sentence: .25 Good
Supporting Sentences: .25 Great!
Transitions/Vocabuary: .25 Good job
counselor
Grammar/Punctuation: .25
Next, while working, I plan on taking more classes
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